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the missing word bothers me, too. It also got killed in an intersection on its way to work, to show up in this meme.
minus-squareexplodicle@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up20·30 days agoYou can add the word “fucking” pretty much anywhere.
minus-squarelugal@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up16·30 days agoYou don’t see it because it’s missing I answered the comment below you but I couldn’t resist this stupid joke
minus-squareTrack_Shovel@slrpnk.netOPlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6arrow-down1·edit-230 days agoA comma maybe, then. ‘the people once tied to them killed in a crosswalk’ really sounds weird to me. Heck, my phone agrees.
minus-squareitslilith@lemmy.blahaj.zonelinkfedilinkarrow-up3·30 days agoSeems like a stylistic choice to me. Leaving out the “have been” makes it sound more poetic, but I don’t think it’s wrong per se
minus-squarelugal@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up2·30 days agoNot a native speaker but for me it sounds fine. The “are now” is left out because it would be repeated if that makes sense. “The people, [who were] tied to them, [are now] killed in a crosswalk.”
minus-squarelugal@lemmy.mllinkfedilinkarrow-up1·29 days agoSo that’s the missing word everyone is bothered by. It wasn’t in the post but in a low level comment. What an unexpected but well executed pay-off!
minus-squareMac@mander.xyzlinkfedilinkarrow-up1·30 days agoGrammar has so many “technically correct” yet odd sentence structures. The sentence definitely has a weird flow and could absolutely contain reader assistance via punctuation.
minus-squareKickMeElmo@sopuli.xyzlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·30 days agoI see a lot of other problems, but not a missing word…
I don’t see a missing word.
You can add the word “fucking” pretty much anywhere.
And it’s rarely wrong to do so!
You don’t see it because it’s missing
I answered the comment below you but I couldn’t resist this stupid joke
A comma maybe, then.
‘the people once tied to them killed in a crosswalk’ really sounds weird to me.
Heck, my phone agrees.
Seems like a stylistic choice to me. Leaving out the “have been” makes it sound more poetic, but I don’t think it’s wrong per se
Not a native speaker but for me it sounds fine. The “are now” is left out because it would be repeated if that makes sense.
“The people, [who were] tied to them, [are now] killed in a crosswalk.”
You’re missing “once”
So that’s the missing word everyone is bothered by. It wasn’t in the post but in a low level comment. What an unexpected but well executed pay-off!
Grammar has so many “technically correct” yet odd sentence structures.
The sentence definitely has a weird flow and could absolutely contain reader assistance via punctuation.
I see a lot of other problems, but not a missing word…