Recently I just wrote a characters physical appearance and started jotting down points about the character, I’ve done a few of these before but never have I started off with the appearance.

The initial note I wrote: A Greyhound-like character with a sleek and slender build, long, narrow face, pointed ears, deep chest, wearing a short, smooth coat, graceful gait, athletic movements.

I normally write with a theme in mind not a character, so the characters I write often feel forced into the story.

I’d love to hear what you feel makes a character apt for a story and what order you tend to build a story in.

  • cerement@slrpnk.net
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    11 months ago

    there’s arguments that Tolkien designed whole languages before he wrote his books – that the stories of Lord of the Rings were just showcases for Quenya and Sindarin and Khuzdul …

    there’s plenty of precedence for designing the pieces before the whole (“bottom up approach”) – rather than trying to fit your characters into a story, try to let the story grow around the character …

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      11 months ago

      I feel unclear that way, having a theme makes my work and intemtions clear. I know how to structure a story within a certain idea but without a greater idea in mind I just keep babbling.

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    11 months ago

    I definitely do that! I have several characters floating around in my head right now that don’t have a story to go into yet.

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        11 months ago

        No, not really. They’re all in kind of different states of completeness, if that makes any sense. Some don’t have names or faces yet, that sort of thing. But I tend to just leave them alone until I need them, then they start to become more concrete depending on the story.

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    11 months ago

    I am no writer, but I can tell you characters come first for me, and also this seems like a logical starting point to create a story. After all everyone’s story depends on their character and those around them.

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    11 months ago

    My characters always come first – well, that and the world they inhabit, as I work mainly in fantasy. Character and world are so intertwined for me, after all, we’re all a result of our contexts and background.

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    11 months ago

    Not me, but Roger Zelazny would sometimes write an entire story about a minor character so that when it came time to put them in a book he’d know exactly how they’d act in a particular situation.

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        11 months ago

        This is my personal trick to get going. I pick an actor to play the character to start the ball rolling.

        “Danny Devito walks into a bar…” is an completely different story than “Clint Eastwood walks into a bar…”

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            11 months ago

            If you know someone who is creative, it makes a great game. One person names two actors who have never appeared together, the other has to come up with a scenario. Actors can be any age they appeared on screen. Best pair I ever got was Gary Coleman and Tom Hiddleston