I really like it! I feel like if you wanted you could make it into a great intro for something with a pop rock feel. I second @jayemar@lemm.ee, right before the end the bend part sounds off key to me.
the bend part sounds off key to me.
I’m just a self proclaimed musical atonal genius 😤…jk
I realised it was wrong when coming up with it, but playing it back with the correct note felt weak (for lack of a better word). The resolution felt stronger with the wrong note so I left it in there. But if it sounds off on first listen then yeah it is (tagging @jayemar@lemm.ee )
Appreciate the pop rock suggestion since that is certainly the type of music I wanna make. I guess my main influence for this sound is Jrock and pop punk tho. Thanks for checking it out
The ambient loop sounds good, and I like what you’re playing over it! Until at least the 0:46 mark where the 2nd note of your bend sounds like it might be the wrong note…?